October 2008 Writing Newsletter

 

Dear writer

 

I wish to share a scene from Kit’s Wilderness (David Almond) with you.

 

Kit is plodding though boring homework about time differences, writing what the teacher wants when his grandfather, an ex coal miner, enters the room. The old man bears gifts - “a flat rectangle of coal polished like a pony” with a tree bark imprint and a black fossil, an ammonite – “a spiralling horn-shaped shell.” 

 

Grandfather talks of the sea laying sediment that turned to rock and over time the rock pressed down on ancient trees and animals:

 

When we dropped down in the cage we dropped through time. Million years a minute. Pitmen. Time travellers. … Mysterious business… it was the light and heat of the sun that made those trees grow. They lay pitch black in the pitch black earth… this stuff blacker than the blackest night, holding the heat and light of the ancient sun…” He giggled, moved the fossil across the desk as if it were alive. He slid it onto my written page. “It’s for you…and the fossil tree as well.” He slid that onto my page, rested it on my answers. “Gifts from a time traveller.”

 

These thoughts arose out of journaling in response to the passage.

 

I think about writing,  how it is so simple (a high count of monosyllables here), how it is like sliding objects onto the written page, laying questions on our mundane, routine answers, resting in the spaces between lines, the gaps between words so the words glow with their presence. Reflect them in their origins, meanings and sounds.  Here too, overlaid, is the grandfather’s oral tale as the boy writes the story of their relationship. And the subtle irony of grandfather’s wisdom, childlikeness and metaphors imposed on the dead school text. A story within a story.  Seeing a word in a lump of coal.

 

 

 

 

 

Close observation of a text we love can teach us so much about our craft.

 

 

 

 

 

Dorian’s Oct.  Workshops

 

 

Stellenbosch

Pastel, Prose and Presence

12 Oct 14:00-17:30    R300 (includes all materials and refreshments)

My Bookshop Die Boord, Stellenbosch

 

Prose is a coloured window, the colours can be seen only when a candle is lit behind it.

 

Join Dorian and Margaret Laubser, a process art facilitator, as we light a candle behind prose. Explore colour through a pastel picture exercise and mindful presence, as we craft the written piece. No art or writing experience needed. Please confirm with Margaret:  021 851 7678 Cell: 082 747 0530 mlaubser@eartheart.co.za

 

 

Egoli  

Imagine Life (Coral Wilder) invites you to a Workshop series that I’m facilitating

Contact coralw@telkomsa.net  011 622-8793   083 450-9148 for venue and costs.

Coral has organised an in-house day with Life Line around stories and meanings.

 

Discovering Meaning through Creative Writing:   Finding Meaning though Words’

Sun 19 Oct 09.30 -13.00         

 

I know that there is room in me for a second huge and timeless life (Rilke)

 

Explore the meaning that is unique to you in your life, through the art of creative writing.

 

You will be guided in a process that will help you ask questions about the purpose of your existence. You will explore your creativity and imagination and find words to tell your story… to infuse that story with meaning and make it more alive.  The workshop also focuses on how to be present in our writing and engage readers and ourselves as part of a great conversation that opens into mystery.

 

talk to Coral about these themes:  A Book of Nights and Days   ‘Keeping a Journal’

and Finding the Fire  ‘Rekindling our passion for Life and Work’

 

Southern Suburbs, Cape Town Venue to be decided

 

Hiding the Plumbing, Wiring and Roof Timbers in the House of Story:

A Workshop on facilitating Workshops using Stories

Sat 25 Oct (2-5) and Sun 26 Oct (10-4) bring a light lunch

Outlay:  R860 (*R360 deposit secures) (includes Dorian’s CD Tortoise Stories, Stories from Africa and the Great Elsewhere)

 

Why stories?  Because stories are origins and origins are places that we walk out from. Because stories have many feet and travel several roads at once...  because the story conjures the invisible. (Deena Metzger)

 

In this workshop we experience the power of story at many levels. I offer practical and theoretical input on the vitality of this ancient craft. We consider mythology, modality and methodology. We engage with hidden aspects of story-shops as we explore the equation: emotional IQ + social IQ + spiritual IQ = Story IQ. While looking at parts, we come to an understanding that the whole is greater than the sum of those parts.

 

Some topics covered:   how to tell and position a story…. quantum reality… circle learning… building a bank of stories… listening…   structure…   timing…     quotations…  

 

who should attend? facilitators involved in:  coaching… business… teaching in any form…psychologists and healers…seekers and wanderers…those considering career change…NGO’s… those in edutainment…lovers of life…those who remember

 

contact Gerard le Sueur Gerard.lesueur@4knowledge.de  021 706 1688 076 544 4015 

 

Stellenbosch

Increase your Joy: Read Like a Writer - Write like a Reader

28 Oct (6-8pm) R65 includes a glass of wine or juice.

 

The books we love are our first teachers. They offer private lessons in the art of writing.  Attention closet writers, lovers of words, book clubbers, book lovers, I offer  interactive talks on how to enhance your writing/reading pleasure and enrich your writng / bookclub evenings. We consider how readers read, and how writers read other writers. 

 

Nov approaching

 

Celebrate the joy of being alive… a five day extravaganza…even stood on Hogsback?

Hogsback East Cape– Writing, Reflecting, Being

Mon 24 – Fri 28 Nov  (Mon afternoon to Fri after lunch

 

Join East Cape poets Cathal Lagan and Brain Walter and West Cape poets Bob Commin and me for this retreat. Visit the eco-shrine, walk the labyrinth, write in the mountains, read at the fireside. Come live the life of a writer. We already have eight bookings, two from Namibia.

 

 

Ongoing activities

 

Anywhere: Spring Stories at Home

This season I have been a storying for groups of friends…an evening, a fire, wine, cheese, breads and tales for the telling. Any rhyme or reason – birthdays, TV fatigue, the art of conversation, sommer. Gather a group for Spring.

 

Mentoring / Email Courses

 

Memoirs, mindfulness adventures, work in the word… genres tumbling out of folk on the one-on-one path. Such a richness of story here

 

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Some folks respond to structure, assignments… if so, ask and it shall be negotiated.

 

 

Poetry for Publication (PFP)

 

Bob Commin and I guide you in writing and selecting your poems for a solo self publication

 

Books x Three

 

Corals Publishers is publishing one of my children’s stories, The Water Diviner. Should be out by Christmas. 

 

The Halo and the Noose, the Power of story-telling and story listen in Business Life with Graham Williams will be out by Nov. Pat Grayosn of Graysonian Press is publishing it. Watch this space for launces in Egoli, Durban and Cape Town.   We run corporate story workshops based on our book. (look at my site for details.)  Here is one response to the manuscript:

 

 

.....should be seen as an exciting step in the long process of reconnecting business life to the mainstream of human history. (UK - Ralph Windle, The Poetry of Business Life)

 

The Achilles Heal, The Healing Art and Craft of Poetry with Bob Commin will be out mid 2009.

 

For 2009 Conscious Living Diary with quotes, poems, recipes, play-dates and gardening-by-the-moon tips contact  linda@stillpoint.co.za

 

Competitions (repeated from Sept)

The Poetry Society’s National Poetry Competition 2008. You can enter now at http://www.poetrysociety.org.uk/content/competitions/npc/

Workshops/Literary Events with other Folk (repeat info)

Bob Commin (poet, creativity coach , storyteller and pastor) runs poetry courses/events in the Southern Suburbs (Caps Bay  to Fish Hoek) (h) 021 447 9550   082 202 5303    bcommin@netactive.co.za  www.making-poetry.com  

Spirituality Group meets every month (2nd Tues) 6.30 pm at home of Mandy Young, 8 Juliana Way South Rd, Pinelands. 021 531 1446. Bring light supper. R50 to Bob Commin


Writer-sites and News (Repeat info)

Lynette Steel (thanks Lynette) highly recommends Robert McDowell, Poetry As Spiritual Practice: Reading, Writing, and Using Poetry in Your Daily Rituals, Aspirations, and Intentions   http://www.poetryasspiritualpractice.com/promotion

 

Consuelo Roland writes

 

My website called www.goodcemeteryguide.com is now live. It uses my novel The Good Cemetery Guide as a starting point to explore the topic of death in our society and how we handle it, from a cultural perspective.

 

Helen Brain, author, has begun writing for a Canadian web-zine (specifically about writing for children) see link at: http://writingforchildren.suite101.com/

 

Source new opportunities every month. Check out Lee Cahill’s www.sabookworm.com  Thanks you Lee for a site that informs and supports writers. This is writer good news.

 

Wordsetc A South African Literary Journal Loosely based on the idea of The New Yorker, this is a new literary journal to look out for.

 

Writers need to read as part of self-tutorship. I suggest you subscribe to New Contrast (poetry and prose) – 4 copies per annum. www.newcontrast.net. Hugh Hodge, the editor is doing a fine job for writers. Thank you Hugh.  Submissions to ed@newcontrast.net - price is on the website.

 

May matter rest on and enter your pages.

 

Dorian

 

PS  Thank you to all those who drop this letter into the wind.

 

Dr Dorian Haarhoff
021 855 3937 / 082 873 6802/ fax 086 511 4751
http://dorianhaarhoffwriter.homestead.com
16 Poinsettia Rd, Heldervue Somerset West 7130